How to Write Business Letters and Memos That Get Results

Sorry to say, but businesses are a haven for bad writing. Harried workers often resort to trite cliches (”the lion’s share,” “”no earthly idea”), technical jargon (”systematized,” “prioritized”), pompous language (”dehired,” “involuntarily separated”) and poorly-focused ideas in their rush to get the job done. 
Try to decipher this real-life bad writing example from a major investment [...]